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		<title>Comment on How to assess your book cover and get the cover you want by Barbara Amaya</title>
		<link>http://warnercoaching.com/2012/02/17/book-covers/#comment-360</link>
		<dc:creator>Barbara Amaya</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Feb 2012 01:20:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Brooke I love the cover with the typewriter keys, I think its the best one out of the bunch, love how the keys look. Maybe you can have your name on the bottom of the cover. I am nowhere near looking for a cover yet but I still dream of that day and have ideas of what I want.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Brooke I love the cover with the typewriter keys, I think its the best one out of the bunch, love how the keys look. Maybe you can have your name on the bottom of the cover. I am nowhere near looking for a cover yet but I still dream of that day and have ideas of what I want.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Scaffolding and the Art of Scene-building by Brooke Warner</title>
		<link>http://warnercoaching.com/2012/01/25/scaffolding-and-the-art-of-scene-building/#comment-347</link>
		<dc:creator>Brooke Warner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 19 Feb 2012 18:56:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m so pleased to hear this, Nancy!</description>
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		<title>Comment on Scaffolding and the Art of Scene-building by nancy</title>
		<link>http://warnercoaching.com/2012/01/25/scaffolding-and-the-art-of-scene-building/#comment-346</link>
		<dc:creator>nancy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 19 Feb 2012 16:38:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Brooke, Line breaks and scene management are what I learned so well from you when we worked together last year. Because of it, I have totally restructured the first 100 pages of my novel, trying to plant more seeds and planning when each crop will be harvested. I really think I&#039;m getting it!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Brooke, Line breaks and scene management are what I learned so well from you when we worked together last year. Because of it, I have totally restructured the first 100 pages of my novel, trying to plant more seeds and planning when each crop will be harvested. I really think I&#8217;m getting it!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Launching Write Your Book in Six Months&#8212;and Doing It Myself Too by Brooke Warner</title>
		<link>http://warnercoaching.com/2012/01/25/launching-write-your-book-in-six-months-and-doing-it-myself-too/#comment-249</link>
		<dc:creator>Brooke Warner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Feb 2012 13:37:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Christie! I need all the cheering I can get. Today, February 1, is day one of completing my first 500 words.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Christie! I need all the cheering I can get. Today, February 1, is day one of completing my first 500 words.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Launching Write Your Book in Six Months&#8212;and Doing It Myself Too by christie nelson</title>
		<link>http://warnercoaching.com/2012/01/25/launching-write-your-book-in-six-months-and-doing-it-myself-too/#comment-246</link>
		<dc:creator>christie nelson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Feb 2012 02:10:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Brooke,
You&#039;re one gutsy woman, putting yourself, sweet James and your kitchen table on UTube!   If I was a betting woman, which I am, my money is on you to make it to the finish line. 10,000 words a month.  Now that&#039;s a goal.  I&#039;ll be watching and cheering from the sidelines. 
Good Luck,
Christie</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Brooke,<br />
You&#8217;re one gutsy woman, putting yourself, sweet James and your kitchen table on UTube!   If I was a betting woman, which I am, my money is on you to make it to the finish line. 10,000 words a month.  Now that&#8217;s a goal.  I&#8217;ll be watching and cheering from the sidelines.<br />
Good Luck,<br />
Christie</p>
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		<title>Comment on Scaffolding and the Art of Scene-building by Bella Mahaya Carter</title>
		<link>http://warnercoaching.com/2012/01/25/scaffolding-and-the-art-of-scene-building/#comment-244</link>
		<dc:creator>Bella Mahaya Carter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 31 Jan 2012 19:37:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Scaffolding is an exquisite tool, Brooke! I&#039;v been going back and forth between my chxch summaries and my chapters, which really helps keep things in perspective. I read your scaffolding post late last night and it&#039;s changed the way I&#039;m working this morning. It definitely helps with clarity and focus. LOVED what you wrote about readers reading for pleasure and wanting payoffs. I saw two films this past weekend that lacked narrative mastery and felt disappointed and frustrated. This is one of the most useful things I&#039;m learning from you: how to stay on task and not wonder into left field. I&#039;m learning the importance of maintaining my narrative arc while providing small epiphanies along the way. Let&#039;s see if I can execute on the page what my mind is beginning to grasp!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Scaffolding is an exquisite tool, Brooke! I&#8217;v been going back and forth between my chxch summaries and my chapters, which really helps keep things in perspective. I read your scaffolding post late last night and it&#8217;s changed the way I&#8217;m working this morning. It definitely helps with clarity and focus. LOVED what you wrote about readers reading for pleasure and wanting payoffs. I saw two films this past weekend that lacked narrative mastery and felt disappointed and frustrated. This is one of the most useful things I&#8217;m learning from you: how to stay on task and not wonder into left field. I&#8217;m learning the importance of maintaining my narrative arc while providing small epiphanies along the way. Let&#8217;s see if I can execute on the page what my mind is beginning to grasp!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Scaffolding and the Art of Scene-building by Progress report, January 29 &#124; Warner Coaching</title>
		<link>http://warnercoaching.com/2012/01/25/scaffolding-and-the-art-of-scene-building/#comment-229</link>
		<dc:creator>Progress report, January 29 &#124; Warner Coaching</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 29 Jan 2012 22:36:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] I&#8217;ve done so far: •Scaffolding (intro and Chapters 1-5 pretty much figured out) •Quiz complete (intending to open the book with [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on Launching Write Your Book in Six Months&#8212;and Doing It Myself Too by Brooke Warner</title>
		<link>http://warnercoaching.com/2012/01/25/launching-write-your-book-in-six-months-and-doing-it-myself-too/#comment-228</link>
		<dc:creator>Brooke Warner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 29 Jan 2012 21:51:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for asking, Bella! I want to get my book out as soon as possible and I&#039;m mostly interested in selling to my clients and people who are interested in what I&#039;m doing. In this case I think my own promotional efforts will go as far as a publisher&#039;s---and I&#039;m principally interested in building my platform. Once I have a larger platform---more readers, more presence, more everything---I&#039;ll probably consider shopping a book to a traditional publisher.

For now, I&#039;ve already hired an amazing designer to do my book jacket, which I&#039;ll share more about as I go. Very excited, actually, to not be dealing with a publisher on this particular project.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for asking, Bella! I want to get my book out as soon as possible and I&#8217;m mostly interested in selling to my clients and people who are interested in what I&#8217;m doing. In this case I think my own promotional efforts will go as far as a publisher&#8217;s&#8212;and I&#8217;m principally interested in building my platform. Once I have a larger platform&#8212;more readers, more presence, more everything&#8212;I&#8217;ll probably consider shopping a book to a traditional publisher.</p>
<p>For now, I&#8217;ve already hired an amazing designer to do my book jacket, which I&#8217;ll share more about as I go. Very excited, actually, to not be dealing with a publisher on this particular project.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Launching Write Your Book in Six Months&#8212;and Doing It Myself Too by Bella Mahaya Carter</title>
		<link>http://warnercoaching.com/2012/01/25/launching-write-your-book-in-six-months-and-doing-it-myself-too/#comment-222</link>
		<dc:creator>Bella Mahaya Carter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jan 2012 22:53:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Excellent! Love this! I have no doubt you can do this, Brooke--and it will be great! One question: why have you decided to publish the book yourself?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent! Love this! I have no doubt you can do this, Brooke&#8211;and it will be great! One question: why have you decided to publish the book yourself?</p>
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		<title>Comment on 6 Ways to Build Your Author Platform *Now* so You Can Sell Your Book in 2012 by Firsthand Platform-Building Tips &#124; Warner Coaching</title>
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		<dc:creator>Firsthand Platform-Building Tips &#124; Warner Coaching</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jan 2012 17:05:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Give it a try by joining my experience, which is all about building your platform!! There are six fun steps that you can get going on [...]</description>
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